Class feedback:
- The acting was good
- Camera shots needed to be more varied
- Good dramatic characterisation; the script, acting, body language
- Costume was well considered
- The camera was unsteady, use a tripod next time if avaliable
- Needed more evidence of editing techniques
- Good use of location; it reflected the dark nature of the narrative
- Effective use of an over-the-shoulder shot
- A close up should have been used for the emotional parts of the drama
- The editing and continuity needed improvement to make the transitions more seamless
All in all, I agree with the comments made my the rest of the class especially considering the camera movements and editing. I feel that the whole group now realise how in future we would work differently to create an effective short film.
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